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Before night

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Roses with a Hasselblad w/ a leaf back. Strip softbox and there is a blue gel on the other light.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Vision 4/5: I would say the thought behind this is a good one - I like the darkness and water droplets, l think there are lots of pieces to this image to add visual interest.

Originality 3/5: Unfortunately, a rose with water drops isn't incredibly original, though I did give you points for composition and the blue lighting.

Technique 4.5/5: Your focus is wonderful - I love the pure focus on the front flower and the gauzy blur on the stems and red rose. It really does make for a lovely image - I'd actually love to put something like this up on my wall.

Impact - 4/5: The only point missing in impact is for slight composition alteration. If the white rose was just a tad closer to the right and a tad further down, there would be a bigger sense of "swooping" through the image with the stems. With the stems on an angle in the image. it draws the eye in, and I just wish there was a bit more stem to see.